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    Hi guys. my name is Ciera Yglesias, and I'm working on writing a story. This is what I have so far. So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me your honest opinion of what you think about it. (:

Prologue

    Its dark, pitch black in this nameless evil place. I feel the walls for support, to try to find my way out. I see a bright yellow light. I follow it, without questioning what it could be. I feel as if I'm memorized by it. My heart quickens because every step I take brings me farther into this unknown world.
    One last step around this corner and I'll be out of this darkness. I turn the corner, and I see nothing but death, destruction, and despair. There are these little unidentified creatures going around and attacking everything in sight. I see familiar faces, but i can't place them. They are flying around with... WINGS?! IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?!
    The winged people are attacking the monsters. Eventually they get over powered and they just vanish! I look for the center of all the destruction, and ITS ME! But I don't look like me. I'm glowing bright yellow, almost as bright as a shooting star. I have wings, they were crescent shaped, and as dark as the midnight sky. My face is outlined by tattoos of stars, but I'm not alone.
    I'm holding hands with a guy, who's glowing the color of blood red. This guy has horns of the Devil, and pitch black eyes, that seem bottomless. The Devil and I are looking at each other with so much passion, that we're oblivious to everything around us.
    "Hoshiko!" Someone yelled my name, the voice was similar to me. I looked around and saw my best friend Yami. She looked so defeated. she spoke to me and said "You betrayed us all."
    That's when I woke up, screaming.

        

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Isi-Daddy Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:huggle: Thank you so much for the :+fav: on my Rattata :thanks:

yours, :iconisi-daddy:
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Kureeru Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks for the fav :D
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Thunder2910 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fave :)
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hippsterlove112 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem c:
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Queen-Kitty Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Photographer
Thank you for the watch!  I'm glad you enjoyed my gallery enough to keep an eye on it :heart:
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devilishxlianneke Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you soo much for the fav  :heart: :la: 
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hippsterlove112 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem c:
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A-Heart-Break-Debut Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the fave.
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hippsterlove112 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Your welcome.
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Copper-LightSource Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Interface Designer

hey! Thank you for faving   

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If you want more pokemon art , feel free to watch, only if you’d like of course C:

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